Writing Your Research Proposal
This guide helps you write a proposal that will move smoothly through the review process.
Proposal Components
Every SafeInsights proposal includes:
1. Research Question
State your primary research question clearly and concisely.
Good example: "How does the frequency of accessing worked examples relate to performance on similar practice problems in college physics?"
Too vague: "What factors affect learning?"
2. Background & Significance
Briefly explain:
- Why this question matters (2-3 sentences)
- How it connects to existing literature (cite 3-5 key papers)
- Expected contribution to the field
3. Target Population
Specify:
- Which SafeInsights data organization(s)
- Education level (e.g., college STEM courses)
- Subject area
- Time period
- Estimated sample size
4. Variables & Measures
List:
- Independent variables: What you're examining (e.g., frequency of video access)
- Dependent variables: What you're predicting (e.g., quiz scores)
- Covariates: What you're controlling for (e.g., prior achievement)
- How measured: Reference data catalog fields
5. Analytic Approach
Describe:
- Methods (e.g., multiple regression, survival analysis)
- Statistical tests
- Any data transformations or preprocessing
- Software/packages you'll use
6. Expected Outputs
Specify exactly what tables, statistics, and plots you'll need:
- Summary statistics tables (specify dimensions)
- Regression coefficients with standard errors
- Plots (e.g., scatterplot of X vs Y with n=10,000)
Be specific about aggregation:
- ✅ "Correlation coefficient aggregated across all students"
- ✅ "Mean quiz score by quartile of practice frequency (n>50 per cell)"
- ❌ "Individual student scores" (not releasable)
7. Privacy Considerations
Explain how you'll protect privacy:
- Minimum cell sizes (typically n≥10)
- Suppression of small counts
- No individual-level data requested
8. Timeline
Provide estimated timeline:
- Analyses development: X weeks
- Expected execution time: X hours
- Analysis after receiving outputs: X weeks
Proposal Template [ADD FROM DESIGN]
[Provide downloadable template or link to one]
# [Study Title] ## Research Question [Your clear, focused question] ## Background & Significance [2-3 paragraphs] ## Target Population - Member organization: [OpenStax / ASSISTments / etc.] - Education level: [e.g., Undergraduate STEM] - Subject: [e.g., College Physics] - Time period: [e.g., Fall 2023 - Spring 2024] - Estimated N: [X students] ## Variables & Measures ### Independent Variables - [Variable 1]: [How measured, data source] ### Dependent Variables - [Variable 1]: [How measured, data source] ### Covariates - [Variable 1]: [How measured, data source] ## Analytic Approach [Methods, tests, software] ## Expected Outputs 1. [Specific output 1] 2. [Specific output 2] [etc.] ## Privacy Considerations [How you'll ensure privacy compliance] ## Timeline [Your estimated timeline]
Common Mistakes to Avoid
❌ Too Vague
"I want to study learning patterns" → What specific patterns? On what platform? In what context?
❌ Intervention Language
"I will randomly assign students to..." → Post-hoc analysis only in v1
❌ Individual-Level Outputs
"I need individual student scores to..." → Request aggregated outputs instead
❌ Insufficient Detail
"I'll run a regression" → Which variables? What model? What outputs?
❌ Missing Privacy Plan
No mention of aggregation or cell sizes → Explain privacy protections explicitly
Review Criteria
Your proposal will be evaluated on:
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Scientific Merit
- Clear research question
- Appropriate methods
- Feasible with available data
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Privacy Compliance
- Adequate protections specified
- Outputs appropriately aggregated
- FEAT considerations addressed
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Technical Feasibility
- Data exists to answer question
- Methods match data structure
- Realistic timeline
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Alignment with Member Priorities
- Member sees value in the research
- Fits with their research agenda
Example Proposal Excerpts
[Include 2-3 short examples of well-written sections]
Next Steps
- Review available data
- Check privacy requirements
- Use the proposal template (link)
- Submit through Management App
- Get help if needed